Ka pai Ted. I like the way you repeated the main phrase on every line. Maybe you could read your poem out and add the Screencastify to your blog? Keep your eye out for this year's Ako Hiko poetry slam!
Kia ora. I am Mya from St Mary’s School. I really liked how you made a fantastic poem. I learnt that In your poem you have BBQ’s with your friends. Maybe you could make more poems and post them on your blog. Please visit my blog here
Hi, Charlotte here from Room 8! I like the summer poem you made. But... when you said Summer so hot need to go for a swim you could of done it like this..Summer so hot. Need to go for a swim? That might be better, and you could put some pictures on! How long did it take to make this?? Bye.
Ka pai Ted. I like the way you repeated the main phrase on every line. Maybe you could read your poem out and add the Screencastify to your blog? Keep your eye out for this year's Ako Hiko poetry slam!
ReplyDeleteGidday Ted your poem has a lot of rhymes witch is really good
ReplyDeleteThank you Angus I think i'm going to comment on your blog becuase of all your lovely comments
ReplyDeleteKia ora. I am Mya from St Mary’s School.
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you made a fantastic poem.
I learnt that In your poem you have BBQ’s with your friends.
Maybe you could make more poems and post them on your blog.
Please visit my blog
here
Mā te wā
Mya
Hi, Charlotte here from Room 8!
ReplyDeleteI like the summer poem you made.
But... when you said Summer so hot need to go for a swim you could of done it like this..Summer so hot.
Need to go for a swim?
That might be better, and you could put some pictures on!
How long did it take to make this??
Bye.
Hi Charlotte,Ted here it took about 10 mins
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